of course..half i get
half i don't

where's my damn spanish book?...*stammers off*

o.o hermoso poema! I love it.
Thought the spanish part is a bit rough, I don't understand it well.

"Yo soy bailando un cumbia para ti,
y tus problemas.

porque ya estoy el sol,
y las estrellas estan en sus ojos."

I think you wanted to say: "You estoy bailando una cumbia para ti y tus problemas"
and the other part, I didn't understand what you meantXD
lol I'm sorry for this (for being annoying), it's just a constructive advice, I still love the poem and it is still going to my favs really beautiful.

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Stairs going to heaven,
and hours of waiting the death,
but life is stronger than ever,
when you feel it will leave you there,
and trust your instincts and actions,
and live longer than death,
beacuse when death calls you down,
wisdome shall rise.

i love it too!
dont understand half of it but i will try to translate this (my sis was learning spanish so she will be v helpfull hehe)

beautiful poem

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^{"Gods don't like people not doing much work. People who aren't busy all the time might start to think."}

beautiful poem.. is last line something like this: and the stars are in your eyes omg my awful Spanish


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one pill makes you larger and one pill makes you small
and the ones that mother gives you
don't do anything at all
-jefferson airplane-

can someone tell me what the spanish part means? im dying to know! other than that, great poem!

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BOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOMMM!

its a beautiful poem! i dont understand why people are having such a hard time understanding the spanish part...ITS FINE! i can understand it perfectly dont worry about it

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tears of the innocent!

<sub>This is absolutely beautiful~ and with only 6 comments! D:

The last line is my favorite. :3</sub>


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_{"When you live, live with your soul, not with your time.
   When you love, love with your heart, not with your mind.
        When you want to be something the world can define, open up your eyes."}

My spanish is pretty rusty but:

Cinco de Drunko- 5th of something
(I don't know what drunko is, but if its written on the 5th of May...)

Soy (I am) Bailando (dancing) un Cumbia (a columbian style dance) para ti (for you)
y tus problemas (and your problems)

porque (because) ya (this one is pretty contextual, it could mean you or now or already) el sol (the sun)
y las estrellas (and the stars) estan en sus ojos (are in your eyes)

I am dancing a Cumbia for you,
And your problems.

Because now I am The Sun,
And the stars are in your eyes.

I needed that lingual work out.

what a beautiful poem, i love the imagery

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loneliness is more frightening than darkness

As I understand it, the sense of the spanish part would be this:

"And I'm dancing a cumbia for you
and your problems

because I'm the sun already
and the stars are in your eyes"



Beautiful poem indeed